Sunset's whisper ..


Listen to the sunset
Can you hear its quiet sigh?
Listen the sun's falling;
Watch it toning down the sky
Soon Darkenss shall surround me
Tho' twinkling stars will dare smile through
While you are far away from me
They'll frown a humble hue
And as the sunset spread its colors
Horizons of gold and red
I lie here all too much alone
In this great, vast chilling bed
For my world has stopped revolving 
Till you return, Time's Standing still
And the cold has settled around me
With its stinging breathless chill
But my love for you keeps growing
Standing fast to fight the cold
Reminds me of your body's warmth
And the story of love untold
So listen to the sunset 
Look up hear its quiet sigh
Tho' we're apart these lonely nights
My love whispers across the sky.

16 love for me ..:

ReeBz said...

I can predict you are either in extreme love with someone, or soon you are about to fall in love =D

Anonymous said...

You're amazing writer! The guy is lucky <3 Bless you.

Salman Saeed said...

You see a star in the sky,
He see a star in the sky,
That's when Love is full of Joy,
He will Never Ever make you Cry.

I pray a prayer for you that there never comes any little thing in between you both that could ever ever wipe off the beautiful charming smile of your face. You both will make this love so strong and so strong will be the bond, that it will only be fragile on divine terms, else, YOU ARE ONE!
Born to be, will die the same.
Feel proud of yourself, and make him proud too by showing HOW is it that he could never have got anyone better than you.

I pray for you.
A friend, maybe.

Reenie said...

:)

Nice one...

I was about to say 'nice poetry'... then stopped myself, I remember a few days back I said this in someone's blog and there were many comments that followed saying:

THIS IS A PROSE!

... and I was like: Jeezz- chill mate- nice PROSE then!

Hehe...

Mia Mirza said...

You know watching the sunset is the best thing to do with a loved one *hugs*

Ubaid said...

love lame hai

per you are awesome

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

I think this could be a love song... its the most beautiful piece you have written according to me. Loved it from the first 'L' to the last 'y'

I can feel an intensity of innocence to its greatest extent, love at its best.

Kudos!

Blasphemous Aesthete

Ria said...

Wow!! Simply Awesome!! :) Loved it.

Nostalgic said...

@ ReeBz: Yeah babe, I'm in extreme love :) up in the sky =D

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@ Anonymous: Thank you :)

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@ Salman: Aww, you're tooooo sweet, know that?

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@ Reenie: Haha, well it's a prose I guess :)

Nostalgic said...

@ Mia: Yes, I know :) everything turns romantic. Eeee, I can't wait for my guy to come back home! *excited*

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@ Ubaid: Aww, shukriya jeee.

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@ Blasphemous: Really? Your comment brings a widdeee 32-teeth smile on my face =D

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@ Ria: Thanks, hun <3

Salman Saeed said...

I am not at all sweet. I abused her today. And then i felt like killing myself =(
http://www.salmansaeed.info/2010/09/silence.html

Sana Castellano said...

Lovely.
This one is for you : Love is what makes two people sit in the middle of a bench when there is plenty of room at both ends.
xx

CrazyGirl said...

i love the picture.. it reminds of ..stuff. and very well written =]

umm.. how r things with O? do i have u on msn? =S

Sidrah said...

I loved it =) <3

can you hear the music when the sun sets ^^

suruchi said...

Hi Nostalgic,
What a beautiful analogy for the sun...
Could never think of the sun as sighing...but now do:-)
May love wrap u in complete warmth forever:-)

WarmSunshine said...

wow... this is the first poem iv read from you... what a sweet rhyming it has!!

good going girl :)

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