Now that you’re gone,
Life is like a barren piece of land,
Unkempt and unattended for,
Overgrown with tall grass,
Which holds neither beauty nor meaning.
Now that you’re gone,
Happiness is like an empty feeling of elation,
Unwanted and uncared for,
Coupled with hollow laughter,
Which brings neither joy nor relief.
Now that you’re gone,
Sorrow is like a vast dark cloud,
Hovering and hanging over,
Coupled with racking sobs,
Which attend to neither grief nor do they relieve.
Now that you’re gone,
Hopes and dreams are like distant objects,
No longer remembered and wished for,
Covered with a heavy cloth,
Neither to be lifted nor moved again.
23 love for me ..:
Aww i can so relate to it :(
I remember once when my guy went off after spending 10 days .....i got hospitalized the next day for 10 days :P
Loved those lines.....described the true emotions :)
Welcome back love so missed u :)
It all goes away some day
He's off to work again?
Your emotions are so clear. Nice read once again.
And cheer up lady!
@ Scribbling Girl: Haha, really? I am on the verge of getting hospitalized :D miss my man!
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@ Pesto: True that :)
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@ Blasphemous: Yes thakur jee, he's off to work again..
wow...beautifully written...wait is so so painful at times
lovely u describe it well
I loooved it! Babe, you got a way with words! I feel exactly like this for at least a month after I meet Baby, LDR and all :)
*awesomeness*
love it !
Welcome back :)
Nice one again !
It is like :
*since you've been gone , everything is just wrong*
I liked this one particularly a lot :
*Now that you’re gone,
Hopes and dreams are like distant objects,
No longer remembered and wished for,
Covered with a heavy cloth,
Neither to be lifted nor moved again.*
Great job again :)
So sad...I had the feeling of this. Your writing is beautiful
Beautifully written....can totally identify with it coz i miss my man too!! :(
I can relate to this quite well. One of my very close friends passed away earlier this year, and I know the emptiness and sorrow and all that.
I wrote about it, and uploaded the story onto my blog, and someone commented saying, "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it's letting go."
Lovely poem by the way. Beautifully written!
=]
aww.... i can understand what it must feel like...i have to live without my hubby for a whole year..sugh..seems like eternity..
anyway..beautiful piece of writing
sigh... painful. i hate separation :@
beautifully penned!!
Loved it.
The pain of separation.
ohh I miss him too!!!
bittersweet memories <3
Awww...:( sad.
Oh my.
I can relate to this.. some things dont hav an answer... untill u find someway to change..
You didn't publish my previous comment!!
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