So life is a bit manic at the moment, so for anyone who just knows what it's like to feel well a bit indescribable I thought I'd share a poem I wrote which tries to find the optimism in life.
A scattered heart sailed off to sea
to find a better part of me
Thoughts and dreams were left revealed
commotion should have stayed concealed
Once opened, it should have shut
clouds floating should stay put
Lingering trails across a mind
pieces left too hard to find
Optimism may lead me astray
but maybe 'It'll get better' starts today.
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Behind the curtain..
- Rooj Siddiqui
- I believe that it's the ordinary that is so distinguished. I am only an amateur who sees the mundane with a twist. Goes around putting titles on self-perceived moments as life goes on by...
10 love for me ..:
Beautiful. Your blog looks more beautiful now, seriously :)
nice! and i cant believe how alike we are feeling:P xoxo
@ Zee: Seriously? I wonder that's how women often feel :)
@ Lost Soul: Thank you, my savior :)
Lol, i ain't any saviour. Its you and only you.
@ Uncommon: Thank you :)
lol..trust me..women are W.I.E.R.D....those crazy mood swings and bitchiness...guys can never understand that:P but cheers for all those women out here:P
beautiful piece,
write such beautiful proses more often. :)
and maybe tomorrow is a better day.
Cheers
Blasphemous Aesthete
Nice :D
@ Anonymous: I always try to pen down something worth reading (= keep reading!
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@ Aazar: Thanks, dude (=
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